Question

【題目】隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變， 購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化�！熬W(wǎng)購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。

優(yōu)點 (advantage)	1.不需要出門；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累
	2.價格通常比較便宜
	3.可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多
缺點 (disadvantage)	1.只看到圖片， 看不到商品本身
	2.容易購買大量不太需要的東西， 造成浪費
你的觀點	……

提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購shopping online; 商品 goods; 導(dǎo)致 cause

注意：1.所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱；

3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計入總數(shù)。

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.

Answer 1

【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點和缺點。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。