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【題目】文段表達

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，用英文寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的郵件。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。所給的提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫李華，你的筆友Peter想了解你日常生活中的榜樣。請你以“A Role Model in My Daily Life.”為主題，給他寫一封郵件，告訴他你日常生活中的榜樣是誰，做了哪些令你敬佩的事情，并談談你的體會與感受。

提示詞語：role model, set, example, help, learn, hope…

To: Peter From: Li Hua Subject: A Role Model in My Daily Life

Hi! Peter, How is it going? I’d like to tell you about my role model in my daily life.________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________Anything new at your school? Yours, Li Hua

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【答案】

To: Peter

From: Li Hua

Subject: A Role Model in My Daily Life

Hi! Peter,

How is it going? I’d like to tell you about my role model in my daily life. My role model in my daily life is my teacher, Mr. Green. He is very friendly to us and he has a good sense of humor. He is patient with all the students in class and tries to make his class interesting. We never feel bored. He teaches us how to think by ourselves and helps us solve the problems at school. We look on him as our “close friend”.

Mr. Green sets a good example for me in my life. He is such a great teacher and I’m proud of being his student. I hope to be a teacher like him when I grow up.

Anything new at your school?

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為話題類作文，要求以A Role Model in My Daily Life為題寫一篇短文。寫作時，要用上提示詞，明確哪些要點，要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。要完成寫作任務，務必把各要點表達清楚。

寫作亮點：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。本文應用了很多短語使得文章很生動，例如He is very friendly to us and he has a good sense of humor. 準確運用時態(tài)，用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。