Question

【題目】寫作

課外閱讀能豐富學(xué)生的課余生活，開拓他們的視野。但是，目前許多學(xué)生并不重視課外閱讀。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語短文，對(duì)這一狀況進(jìn)行分析并提出建議。

要求：

1. 80—120詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱

參考要點(diǎn)：

1. 學(xué)生不重視課外閱讀的原因（作業(yè)太多、 沒有時(shí)間讀書、時(shí)間花在手機(jī)或電腦上……）

2. 閱讀的好處（更好地了解世界、學(xué)會(huì)如何思考、生活更加豐富多彩……）

3. ……

At present, only a few student do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. ________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】At present, only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are busy with too much homework. Secondly, They don’t have time for reading. What’s more, some students haven’t formed the habits of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on the phone or the Internet.

However, reading is very important. By reading students can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help them develop the way of thinking. Last but not least, reading can make students’ life more colorful.

There is still something we can do to help the students read more books. For one thing, teachers are supposed to cut down the homework so that students can have more time to read. For another. It’s a good idea to build reading clubs so that students can read more books.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇短文使用了不少短語如First of all、quite a lot of、too much、However、Besides等，也使用了一些固定句型如They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet（他們寧愿在電視和網(wǎng)絡(luò)上度過閑暇時(shí)間）. For one thing, teachers are supposed to cut down our homework so that we can have more time to read.（首先，教師應(yīng)該減少我們的家庭作業(yè)，這樣我們可以有更多的時(shí)間去閱讀。）為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。