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【題目】書面表達(dá)

班隊(duì)課上大家介紹自己的朋友。假如 Lucy 是你的好朋友，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示向你的同學(xué)介紹她 的情況.

注意：1. 詞數(shù) 80-100 詞。首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，語言準(zhǔn)確得當(dāng)，條理清楚，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Hi, everyone! I am going to say something about my best friend Lucy.

Answer 1

【答案】Lucy is my best friend．She has a healthy lifestyle，she exercises three time s a week and she never eats junk food．She loves watching game shows because she thinks they are educational. she is good at singing and she has a gift for music．We are both good at playing tennis，but she is more hard-working. I love Lucy because she often cares and helps me and she is a lovely and kind girl．Last weekend she went to countryside and visited her grandparents with her parents. She went fishing in the river behind her grandparents’ home with her grandpa. She had a good time there.

【解析】

這是一篇材料作文。假如Lucy 是你的好朋友，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示向你的同學(xué)介紹她的情況。本文人稱主要是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。仔細(xì)閱讀提示和要點(diǎn)、注意事項(xiàng)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫作的基本框架。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱，提綱包括所有提示要點(diǎn)。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：

露西是我最好的朋友。她有一個(gè)健康的生活方式，她每周鍛煉三次，從不吃垃圾食品。她喜歡看游戲節(jié)目，因?yàn)樗�認(rèn)為他們有教育意義。她擅長(zhǎng)唱歌，有音樂天賦。我們都擅長(zhǎng)打網(wǎng)球，但她工作更努力。我愛露西，因?yàn)樗��?jīng)常關(guān)心和幫助我，她是一個(gè)可愛和善良的女孩。上周末她去了農(nóng)村，和父母一起去看望了她的祖父母。她和爺爺一起去祖父母家后面的河里釣魚。她在那兒玩得很開心。