Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。（A）給你的好朋友Lily發(fā)一封電子郵件。告訴她你昨天因感冒沒去上學(xué)，看過醫(yī)生后醫(yī)生告訴你按時(shí)服藥，多喝水，好好休息不要學(xué)到很晚�，F(xiàn)在好多了。請(qǐng)她不要擔(dān)心。每空一詞。

(B)假設(shè)你叫李林，談?wù)勈�年后你的生活。�?nèi)容包括：職業(yè)，居住地，業(yè)余愛好及原因等。要求：書寫整潔，意思清楚，語(yǔ)句連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，適當(dāng)想象。80個(gè)詞左右。

提示：In ten years, I think I will, as a /an …

評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1、字?jǐn)?shù)不夠扣1分。2、書寫不規(guī)范扣1分。3、條理不清晰扣一分。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version1：

Dear Lily,

How are you?

Yesterday morning, I didn't go to school because I felt terrible. My mother took me to see a doctor. The doctor said, “You have a bad cold. You should drink more water and have a good rest and shouldn’t study too late.” I had to stay in bed and take some medicine on time, but don't worry about me. After taking the medicine, I’m feeling much better now. please write back soon!

Yours,

Jane

One possible version2：

I have a dream that I think I will be a teacher in my hometowm in ten years. I like teacher because my English teacher played an important role in my life, she not only taught me to think ,but also encouraged me to pursue my dream.As a teacher I will set a good example for my student.I will be strict with my work.My favorite sport is playing basketball.I think playing basketball is a good way to release pressure and keep healthy.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘述清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。