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【題目】昨天班會課同學(xué)們的積極地討論手機交友的趣事，引發(fā)同學(xué)們對智能手機的不同看法。請你寫一篇關(guān)于手機帶給我們生活的巨大影響。提示:
1）. hurt, cheat, safely
2）.WeChat（微信）Smartphones（智能手機）functions (功能)information（信息）change（改變）King of Glory(王者榮耀) Red envelopes （紅包）
3）. 影響Affect學(xué)習(xí)，易遭到網(wǎng)上詐騙 fraud，精神頹廢spiritual decadence，無上進心upward mobility，影響身心健康。
4）.提高自控能力improve the control ability，加強辨別是非真假的能力和判斷力strengthen the ability to distinguish and judgment，豐富精神enrich the spiritual世界，多參加課外活動，多進行體育鍛煉。
要求：1）文章內(nèi)容符合題意，可參考所給提示詞。
2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名和地名。
3）80詞左右。

Answer 1

【答案】A possible version:

Yesterday, we made a discussion about making friends by smartphones. Some students gave different ideas about using smartphones.

As we know, Smartphones open our eyes and help us get more information quickly. For example, wechat is more and more popular, we can make more friends and read more books easily. Playing games and grabbing red packets makes us relaxed after long time reading.

But some students disagree. They think playing games too much will affect their studying and they'll have no time to talk with their parents and friends. They will fail their tests and lose heart in studying. Friends on line may cheat us. Some students are getting spiritual decadence and have no upward mobility.

In my opinion, we must improve the control ability and strengthen the ability to distinguish and judgment. We can do more outside activities with our friends after school to keep healthy. We'll spend more time talking with our parents and friends in real life.

【解析】本文是篇議論文，要根據(jù)三點要求來完成，分別是 1．引出主題；2．不同同學(xué)的看法及其原因： 影響學(xué)習(xí)，易遭到網(wǎng)上詐，精神頹廢，無上進心，影響身心健康；3．我們應(yīng)該如何做：提高自控能力，加強辨別是非真假的能力和判斷力，豐富精神enrich the spiritual世界，多參加課外活動，多進行體育鍛煉。文章要點齊全，表達思路明確，知識點運用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿�，文中使用了非常好的短語和詞匯為文章增色不少，比如1、開闊眼界，增長知識。open our eyes and help us get more information 2、精神頹廢，不求上進getting spiritual decadence and have no upward mobility等．還運用了一些長句使得文章更加豐富多彩，如 In my opinion, we must improve the control ability and strengthen the ability to distinguish and judgment.