Question

【題目】學校英語報社正在開展題為“The Greatest Help”的征文活動。什么人或物給了你最大的幫助?你取得了哪些進步?有什么感想或受到了哪些教育?請寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文進行投稿,文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名和姓名。

The Greatest Help

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Answer 1

【答案】The Greatest Help

I have got lots of help, but my father gives me the greatest help of all.

Though my father is a very kind man, he is very strict with me. He always pushes me to study hard and tries to find mistakes in everything I do. Sometimes, I doubt if he is my father. He leads me to read plenty of books. He says, "The more books you read, the better person you will be." He also says that health is the most important thing for everybody. So I am made to do lots of exercise. Anyway, we have left our happiness and laughter everywhere, on the playground, in the swimming pool, on the mountains and so on. When I meet any difficulties, he encourages me and helps me out. He is always there for me.

As I grow older, my thoughts change from misunderstanding to understanding. He is not only my father and a sincere friend but also my guide and helper. I will never forget the greatest help and deepest love from his strictness and exceptions because they make some big difference in my life.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們以The Greatest Help為題，介紹一下在你的生活里，什么人或什么事給了你最大的幫助，并說一說你的感受。審題可知，這是一篇話題作文，題目中只給出了題目，具體的內(nèi)容需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，來組織語言，串聯(lián)成文，因此寫作前，要仔細思考，確定具體的寫作內(nèi)容。然后再確定文章的時態(tài)和人稱，這篇短文應以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)或者一般過去時態(tài)為主，第三人稱來敘述，要注意謂語動詞形式的變化。寫作時，應注意英語句式表達和漢語習慣的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，而應使用恰當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句式結構，以簡單句結構為基礎，穿插使用并列句或者復合句。為提升文章水平，應選用一些較高級的詞匯和復雜結構，成為文章的亮點。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫。