Question

【題目】假如你是小明，你的好友李華這學(xué)期進入畢業(yè)前夕，感覺焦慮，向你寫了封求助信。請你根據(jù)以下提示給李華寫一封回信。

提示：

1）現(xiàn)代社會，很多人感受到來自生活、工作和學(xué)習(xí)的壓力，這是很正常的。

2）情緒的重要性: 好的情緒管理對一個人的思想、決定和行為起到積極作用。

3）調(diào)整情緒的建議：學(xué)會放松，比如放學(xué)后適當(dāng)運動和周末戶外活動等；學(xué)會交流，比如晚餐時與家人聊天，課間與同學(xué)和老師交流；保持身體健康，堅持鍛煉是必要的。

你的建議（再給出一至兩條調(diào)整情緒的建議）。

參考詞匯：manage emotions 管理情緒； be under pressure感受到壓力; thoughts 思想

要求：1）語言通順，觀點明確，書寫工整；

2）要求80-100詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Dear Li Hua,

I'm glad that you told me your worry before graduation. It's normal that most people

I hope my advice can help you manage your emotions. And I'm looking forward to your reply soon.

Yours,

Xiao Ming

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear Li Hua,

I'm glad that you told me your worry before graduation. It's normal that most people are under pressure from life, work and study nowadays. It's important for us to manage our emotions. Good emotions play an active part in our thoughts, decisions and activities. Here is my advice for managing emotions.

Firstly, learn to relax. For example, you can do sports after school and have outdoor activities at weekends. Secondly, learn to communicate. You'd better chat with your family after dinner, and communicate with your classmates and teachers during the break. Thirdly, you should keep healthy, so it's necessary for you to keep doing exercise.

In addition, keeping a balanced diet and a good mood can also help you.

I hope my advice can help you manage your emotions. And I'm looking forward to your reply soon.

Yours,

Xiao Min

【解析】

該題要求一篇書信，幫助你的朋友在畢業(yè)前夕，解決思想問題，你要給他調(diào)整情緒的建議，需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能脫離題目要求。

1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，本篇作文要點齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，熟練地使用了語句間的連接成分，使整個文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。在寫作時承接短文第一段內(nèi)容提示；第二段先舉例說明要放松自己，然后建議學(xué)會溝通交流；第三段是提出希望采納建議。