Question

【題目】書面表達

如今的交通已經成了許多城市的主要困擾。假如你是一名工程師，請你設計一種交通工具，既可以解決部分交通運行的問題，又有助于環(huán)保。

要求：

1. 要展開大膽的想象，可以假設為一種空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具。

2. 內容要合理、完整、豐富與流暢。

3. 詞數(shù)：不少于80。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

An Important Vehicle

As an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle. It's________________________________________________________________________

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I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.

Answer 1

【答案】An Important Vehicle

As an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle. It's an air bus. You are right. It's a kind of special bus, and it can also fly in the air. When there are too many cars and buses on the street, it can fly in the air. It doesn't cause any accidents or trouble. At the same time, it is so convenient that lots of people will take it.

On the bus, there are enough seats for the passengers. What's more, it doesn't run on oil but a kind of special water. That's to say it will be very good for people to take it, because it doesn't produce any pollution at all.

I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。假如你是一名工程師，要求你展開大膽的想象，設計一種交通工具，可以假設為一種空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具；既可以解決部分交通運行的問題，又有助于環(huán)保。根據(jù)所給的提示材料可知本文時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一和第三人稱。在寫作時，要注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查字數(shù)是否符合要求。