Question

【題目】 書面表達(dá)

你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。（80詞左右）

時(shí)間	來到中國已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。
旅游	曾經(jīng)去過長城，故宮等名勝。
喜好	過去喜歡看科幻小說，現(xiàn)在對中國古典書籍很感興趣，已經(jīng)讀完了2本名著。
工作情況	早晨8點(diǎn)起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時(shí)間練習(xí)漢語。
夢想	去很多不同的地方，了解中國文化，品嘗中國美食。

I have a pen friend named Tom.

Answer 1

【答案】I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 a.m. and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time. He teaches English in a middle school in Beijing. He works hard. He likes China. He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food in the future.

【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文。你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過去式和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。寫作時(shí)，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱：1. 來到中國已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing.2. 曾經(jīng)去過長城，故宮等名勝。He has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest.3. 過去喜歡看科幻小說，現(xiàn)在對中國古典書籍很感興趣，已經(jīng)讀完了2本名著。He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics.4. 早晨8點(diǎn)起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時(shí)間練習(xí)漢語。He gets up at 8 a.m. and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time.5. 去很多不同的地方，了解中國文化，品嘗中國美食。He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food.（二）根據(jù)提綱連詞成句，連句成篇，注意連詞的使用。（三）寫完以后，在閱讀一遍，檢查單詞拼寫，語法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語序，大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，主謂一致等是否有錯(cuò)誤。