Question

【題目】 生活中總有些不經(jīng)意的事讓你感動，總有些平凡的人讓你難以忘記。白楊是我的同學(xué)。她家境貧寒；她精心照顧患病母親；她學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，成績優(yōu)異；她關(guān)心同學(xué)，樂于助人；她經(jīng)常利用空閑時(shí)間做志愿者工作。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹白楊，并談一談她對你及同學(xué)們的影響。

There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. ________

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Answer 1

【答案】There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.

My classmate Bai Yang comes from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she cares for the classmates and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students.

She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.

【解析】

這是一篇人物介紹。人物身份為同學(xué)白楊，介紹分四個(gè)要點(diǎn)：她家境貧寒；她精心照顧患病母親；她學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，成績優(yōu)異；她關(guān)心同學(xué)，樂于助人；她經(jīng)常利用空閑時(shí)間做志愿者工作。人稱為第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意語法正確，善用連詞，使各個(gè)要點(diǎn)連貫。

【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness.她精心照顧生病的母親。who has a serious illness為定語從句。

【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.不管生活多么艱苦，她仍然笑對生活。No matter how hard the life is為讓步狀語從句。