Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

雷鋒同志說過：“我要把有限的生命，投入到無限的為人民服務(wù)之中去�！闭堃浴癊veryone Needs Help”為題，寫一篇作文。

要求：◆詞數(shù)：80個左右。文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

◆書寫工整，拼寫、語法正確，內(nèi)容層次分明；

◆全文中不要提及真實(shí)的校名和人名。

Everyone Needs Help

In our daily life,_____________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Everyone Needs Help

In our daily life, we will meet different kinds of people, no matter at home, in school, or at some other places. Everyone needs help, I think. I got much help from my parents, my friends, my teachers, my classmates and so on, even some strangers. For example, my parents often help me wash clothes, my teachers often give me help in learning. At the same time, I also help others. I help my parents put away our clothes, I lend something to my classmates. It’s happy to help others. We should help each other. I tell you a story.

One day I saw a little girl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back. She was walking happily. Then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. She ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand. I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety. He thanked us over and over. I think the little girl was, though very young, a very warm-hearted person.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹三方面的內(nèi)容，第一方面，自己是否接受過其他人的幫助，第二方面，自己是否幫助過需要幫助的人，第三方面講述自己或他人的一個這方面的故事。該方面用過去時(shí)態(tài)。

亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇短文層次分明，行文流暢。不僅注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如no matter at home，n school，or at some other places，F(xiàn)or example，at the same time，then，but she was too short to help him to stand，over and over等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。