Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

本學(xué)期我們認(rèn)識了陽光中學(xué)的 Daniel�，F(xiàn)在你想把 Daniel 介紹給你的筆友李雷，請根據(jù)以 下提示，寫一篇 60 詞左右的英語短文。

注意：

1. 短文必須包括所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 2. 短文開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Li Lei,

I would like to introduce my best friend Daniel to you.

Do you want to be friends with him? Please write back to me soon.

Yours, Nancy

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Lei,

I would like to introduce my best friend Daniel to you.

He is thirteen years old. He wears glasses and has short hair. He is good at Maths. He likes playing computer games. He is helpful. He often cleans the flats for the elderly. He likes hamburgers and cola. They are not healthy at all. He wants to change his lifestyle. He plans to eat more fruit and vegetables. He wants to swim once a week, He likes wearing sports clothes and trainers because they are light and comfortable. His favourite festival is the Spring Festival because he likes letting off fireworks. He also thinks that people can get together on that day.

Do you want to be friends with him? Please write back to me soon.

Yours, Nancy

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，也是一篇書信作文。要求把Daniel介紹給你的筆友李雷。這篇作文難度不大，本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，認(rèn)真閱讀表格內(nèi)的要點提示，短文必須包括所有要點，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。本文主要時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時，注意時態(tài)時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，詞數(shù)60 詞左右，短文開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。