Question

為了提高同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的興趣，你校將成立一個(gè)英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部（the English Club），正在招聘俱樂(lè)部主席。假設(shè)你叫李華，非常想成為俱樂(lè)部主席，請(qǐng)準(zhǔn)備一篇演講稿，積極參加應(yīng)聘。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1.             自我介紹：性格開(kāi)朗，英語(yǔ)流利；
2.             應(yīng)聘目的：提高能力，幫助同學(xué)；
3.             應(yīng)聘優(yōu)勢(shì)：你曾經(jīng) ……
4.             當(dāng)選后最想開(kāi)展的一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)及理由 ……
注意：1. 演講稿須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
2. 第3、4要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容共用4至5句話展開(kāi)合理想象，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，演講稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
4. 生詞：fluently 流利地  adv.
Hello, everyone,
First of all, thank you for giving me the chance to speak. Now please allow me to introduce
myself. My name is Li Hua. _______________________________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you!               

Answer 1

Hello, everyone,
First of all, thank you for giving me the chance to speak. Now please allow me to introduce myself. My name is Li Hua. I am outgoing. I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. I would like to be the chairperson of the English Club in order to improve my abilities and help my classmates. I took part in the English writing competition when I was in Grade 7 and I won the first prize. If I am chosen to be the chairperson, I will hold an English corner. And more students can take part in it and practice their English.                                                               
That’s all. Thank you!   

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類(lèi)作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿(mǎn)意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。