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【題目】文段表達(dá)。（15分）

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一段意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入所要完成的回信內(nèi)。所給的英文提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫李華，最近你的美國(guó)筆友Tony要來北京體驗(yàn)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化，請(qǐng)根據(jù)他的問題回復(fù)郵件，為他設(shè)計(jì)北京一日游活動(dòng)，幫助他體驗(yàn)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化。請(qǐng)描述你們打算去的地方、具體的活動(dòng)安排、以及這樣安排的理由。

提示詞語(yǔ)：traditional Chinese culture, tea house,Peking Opera, paper cutting

ToTony From Li Hua Subject A trip of traditional Chinese culture Hi!Tony, I’m glad that you will come to Beijing soon.___________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi, Tony!

I’m glad that you will come to Beijing soon. There are lots of places of interest in Beijing. In order to experience traditional Chinese culture better, I do recommend Beijing Hutong tour.

First, we’re going to go sightseeing along the lanes in Hutong. The houses in Hutong are traditional, such as Siheyuan. From them, you can imagine how people used to live. Of course you can stop anywhere you like and it is interesting to take pictures or have a close look. Second, we are going to pay visits to a Hutong family. We can have lunch there and have a short talk with the local residents, which can help you learn about many stories of the past. We can not only appreciate the dramatic changes that Hutong has undergone, but also see evidence of the history of Beijing, experience the old way of life and exper ience traditional Beijing culture.

In a word, Hutongs are the homes of common people in the past. It is easy to know how people lived and had fun in the old days. So it is a good choice to learn about traditionalChinese culture.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為提綱類作文，要求根據(jù)Tony的問題回復(fù)郵件，為他設(shè)計(jì)北京一日游活動(dòng)，幫助他體驗(yàn)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化。請(qǐng)描述你們打算去的地方、具體的活動(dòng)安排、以及這樣安排的理由。寫作提綱已經(jīng)列出，要求明確，故要完成寫作任務(wù)，務(wù)必把各提綱所要求的內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇范文成功地完成了寫作任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。本文應(yīng)用了很多短語(yǔ)使得文章很生動(dòng)，例如There are lots of places of interest in Beijing. In a word, Hutongs are the homes of common people in the past.賓語(yǔ)從句和定語(yǔ)從句From them, you can imagine how people used to live. Of course you can stop anywhere you like and it is interesting to take pictures or have a close look.的應(yīng)用使得短文表達(dá)更豐富；表示順序的副詞First, Second, Finally,的應(yīng)用更使得短文表述層次更清晰。總之，該文是一篇不錯(cuò)的短文。