Question

【題目】書面表達

請根據(jù)表格中的信息，以“My Good Friend”為題，介紹一下你的好朋友Lucy。詞數(shù)：60詞左右。

	信息
	名字	Lucy
	年齡	12
	喜歡的顏色	紅色
	常做的運動	打網(wǎng)球
	喜歡的蔬菜	西紅柿
	喜歡的水果	草莓
	三餐	早餐：牛奶，雞蛋 午餐：米飯，西紅柿，雞肉 晚餐：沙拉，面包

My Good Friend

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Good Friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Lucy. She is 12 years old. Her favorite color is red. Her favorite sport is tennis, so she often plays tennis with me after school. And her favorite vegetable is tomatoes, because she thinks it is good for health. She likes strawberries best.

She has a healthy eating habit. She has eggs and milk for breakfast. She has rice, tomatoes and chickens for lunch. She has salad and bread for dinner. We often help each other.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友Lucy。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： Her name is…，Her favorite color is…, She likes…等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意完整的表達出提綱所列內(nèi)容。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字叫Lucy，接下來介紹Lucy的年齡、愛好和飲食，最后指出我們經(jīng)�；ハ鄮椭�。此處plays tennis，after school，be good for, help each other等這些詞組的運用以及連詞so, and, because的運用也讓文章增色不少。