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【題目】（江蘇省連云港市崗埠中學(xué)2015-2016學(xué)年度九年級(jí)）張濤是一名九年級(jí)學(xué)生，面對(duì)繁重的學(xué)業(yè)和升學(xué)壓力，他總是感到焦慮不安，晚上還經(jīng)常失眠。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你所學(xué)的知識(shí)，針對(duì)他的問題，運(yùn)用色彩療法給他提些建議。

要求：1. 書寫工整，語言連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

Dear Zhang Tao,

I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice.

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If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.

Yours,

John

Answer 1

【答案】I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice.

Firstly, if you always feel stressed, I advise you to wear blue or white. The two colours can make you feel calm and peaceful. You can also try wearing green, because it can make you feel energetic.

Secondly, you may paint your bedroom blue if you can’t sleep well at night. Sleeping in a blue room is good for your mind and body, because blue can create a feeling of harmony.

Finally, perhaps you should use yellow stationery when you study for exams, because yellow can make you wise.

If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.

Yours,

John

【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如feel stressed，advise sb. to do，make sb. do，at night，in a blue room，be good for，study for exams，make a phone call等。而if you always feel stressed, I advise you to wear blue or white. / You can also try wearing green, because it can make you feel energetic./ perhaps you should use yellow stationery when you study等多種從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢。同時(shí)，Firstly、Secondly、Finally等詞使文章的層次清晰、敘述自然，是本文的亮點(diǎn)所在。