Question

【題目】【2016江蘇蘇州】書面表達。

上海迪斯尼樂園于今年6月16日正式開放，許多孩子打算前往游玩。假如你是一名樂園的志愿者，請你根據(jù)下列表格中的要點提示，用英語向孩子們介紹樂園并提醒他們文明游園。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 短文須包括所有要點，不要逐詞解釋，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；

3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

參考詞匯：theme n.主題； firework n.煙火

Good morning , children !

As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland , I’d like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it .

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The park is worth your visit . I hope you will have fun .

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, children!

As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland, I’d like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.

The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai. You can get there by underground. It’s made up of six theme parks. You can join in different kinds of activities there, such as enjoying wonderful musicals or plays. Also, there’re lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose. At night, you can watch fireworks.

However, it’s important to behave well in the park. Littering isn’t allowed. You should keep the park clean. Remember to wait for your turn anytime. Moreover, it’s impolite to shout loudly in public.

The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭和結(jié)尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文多次使用固定短語如be made up of（由……組成），different kinds of（不同種類的），such as（例如），lots of（許多），wait for（等等），為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。