Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

如你是Zhang Ping, 剛剛收到加拿大筆友Jeff的來(lái)信，他想了解你的一些情況�，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 介紹自己的愛(ài)好，擅長(zhǎng)的科目、運(yùn)動(dòng)等；2. 介紹自己的上學(xué)方式以及班里大部分同學(xué)的上學(xué)方式；3. 談?wù)勀愕膶W(xué)校規(guī)則及你對(duì)這些規(guī)則的看法；4. 你喜歡的動(dòng)物和原因。 詞數(shù)：80詞左右。

Dear Jeff,

Thanks a lot for your last letter. Now I am writing to tell you about my life here._____________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Zhang Ping

Answer 1

【答案】ear Jeff,

Thank you for your last letter. Now I’m writing to tell you about my life here. I like Chinese, our Chinese teacher is very funny. I also like sports. I am good at running and playing basketball. My favorite animals are pandas, because they are very cute and kind of shy. I usually go to school on foot because my home is not very far from the school. Many students take the bus to school. Some students ride their bikes to school. I have many rules at school. I can’t talk in class. We can’t run in the hallways. And we can’t eat in the classroom. We must eat in the dining hall. Oh, they are terrible. Do you have many school rules like us? Please write to me!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Zhang Ping

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如Thank for; tell about; far from; good at; kind of; play basketball; on foot; take the bus; at school; like us; write to me 等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)I like Chinese, our Chinese teacher is very funny.和原因狀語(yǔ)從句I usually go to school on foot because my home is not very far from the school./ My favorite animals are pandas, because they are very cute and kind of shy.的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。