Question

【題目】假如你是在江陰學習的英國交流學生Max,你的英國同學Simon給你寫了一封電子郵件。請你根據(jù)所學的關于顏色的知識，對學校校服款式和顏色(red and white sports clothes for girls; blue and white sports clothes for boys)加以評價。

Hey Max,

I haven’t heard from you since you arrived in Jiangyin. How are you getting on? Is everything OK with the school you study in? What are your school uniforms like?

Write soon!

Yours,

Simon

要求:

1.就校服的顏色以及款式加以評價；

2.內(nèi)容充實，語言流暢，意思連貫；

3.詞數(shù)在80個左右

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Answer 1

【答案】Hey Max,

I haven’t heard from you since you arrived in Jiangyin. How are you getting on? Is everything OK with the school you study in? What are your school uniforms like?

I like this style of school uniform very much.I think wearing such school uniforms can make us look not only smart but also sporty.And we may feel energetic when we wear them.I like the colours as well.It’s good for boys to wear blue and white.They are a good match. They can make us feel less stressed. And red is also a good colour for girls. Red represents power and strength. It makes us feel full of energy.It can also make us take action easily.

Write soon!

Yours,

Simon

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【解析】

本題是一篇話題作文，對于對學校校服款式和顏色加以評價。本文時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時，注意主謂一致。字數(shù)應該在80詞以上，不要寫得太少。寫作時，首先列好提綱要點（我非常喜歡這種風格的校服。我認為穿這種校服不僅可以使我們看起來聰明而且有運動精神。而且當我們穿上它們時，我們會感到精力充沛。我也喜歡這些顏色。男孩子穿藍色和白色是很好的。它們是很好的搭配。它們能讓我們感覺壓力減輕了。紅色對于女孩也是很好的顏色。紅色代表力量和力量。它讓我們充滿活力，也能讓我們輕松行動。），運用我們熟悉的句型，同時注意連詞的使用和表達的順序，語言表達要符合英語習慣，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫、語法錯誤（名詞單復數(shù)，主謂一致等）。

序、主謂一致等。