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【題目】書面表達

“南通市安全教育平臺”讓廣大中小學(xué)生學(xué)到了很多安全知識。假如你是Jack，你的英國朋友Simon想了解平臺的相關(guān)內(nèi)容，請你根據(jù)下表提示用英語寫一篇短文，從提供的六個類別里選擇兩個，跟 Simon談?wù)勏鄳?yīng)的保護自身安全的措施，并分享你的體會。

Contents （內(nèi)容）	Categories（類別）
	fire safety	food safety
	traffic safety	Internet safety
	natural disasters	accidental injuries
Solutions（措施）	……（請按你自選的兩類內(nèi)容分別寫兩點）
Understanding（體會）	treasure life；…（請寫1～2點）

提示詞匯：accidental injuries意外傷害 treasure珍愛 vt．

注意：1．短文中應(yīng)包含所要求的信息，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2．詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3．短文中中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。

Dear Simon，

Safety is very important．Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety．A website called nantong. sa fetree. com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety．On the website，I have learned a lot．

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Simon，

Safety is very important．Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety．A website called nantong.sa fetree. com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety．On the website，I have learned a lot．

Food safety is the most common problem with us students．We should stay away from fast food．Perhaps fast food is delicious，but it’s bad for our health．Some dishes and food may be expired and you shouldn't eat them the next day，especially the dishes and food that were put into the fridge the night before．I once ate the dishes in the fridge．The next day，when I got to school，I had a stomachache．At least you should heat it enough before you eat them．Next，the traffic safety is also a big problem．It's necessary for us to obey the traffic rules，especially when we’re on the way to school or back home．Pay more attention to the traffic lights．Don't cross the road when the light is red．We should always go on the right side．Don't ride bikes side by side．

All in all，we must realize the danger around us and treasure our lives．Safety is always the first priority．

Yours

Jack

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，跟我的英國朋友Simon談?wù)劙踩�的類別以及相應(yīng)的保護自身安全的措施，并分享我的體會。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Food safety is……，We should…….，when I got to……，we must……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。