【題目】（題文）書面表達(dá)

人生如旅。在你的成長過程中，許多人感動(dòng)著你，影響著你，如：父母、老師、朋友、故事人物……最近你市正舉行以“The person who has influenced me most”為題的中學(xué)生英文征文活動(dòng)，Spud Webb深深地影響著你，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)完成征文。

要求：(1)表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

(2)必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

(3)詞數(shù)：100詞左右(征文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；

(4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。

The person who has influenced me most

The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.

Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963.________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

【答案】The person who has influenced me most

The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.

Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963. He is short, but he loves sports very much, especially basketball. His dream was to join the NBA in the future. So he practised hard every day to make his dream come true. Finally, he joined the NBA successfully.

Why is Spud Webb successful? Because he has a dream in his life. He always practises hard, and he tries his best to play it well. At the same time, his parents give great support to him.

Spud Webb is special to me because he has influenced me greatly. I also love playing basketball. Basketball has become one important part in my life. Many people say I'm not tall enough to be a basketball player, but Spud Webb sets a good example to me.

Spud Webb's success shows us that anyone can achieve his dream through hard work.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們以The person who has influenced me most為題，介紹一個(gè)在你的生活中對(duì)你影響最大的人Spud Webb，題目中給出了這個(gè)人的基本信息，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)表格的提示，用英語來對(duì)這個(gè)人進(jìn)行介紹。通過審題可知，文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括三個(gè)部分：首先介紹Spud Webb的基本情況；然后介紹他成功的原因；最后來說一下他對(duì)你的影響�；厩闆r部分有相關(guān)的提示，我們用英語翻譯出來，后面兩個(gè)內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，寫出合情合理的內(nèi)容。除文章內(nèi)容上的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)之外，另一個(gè)難點(diǎn)是英語的表達(dá)，與漢語的習(xí)慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，句式要完整，并使用恰當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~、短語和句型。句子結(jié)構(gòu)可以用簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提高文章檔次。同時(shí)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

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