Question

【題目】請根據(jù)下表中的信息用英文介紹你的好友Lily。要求條理清楚，語句通順，可做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)100字左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

外貌	圓臉，笑瞇瞇的大眼睛；比我矮一點；帶著小圓眼鏡，讓她看上去很機靈。
特點	1. 禮貌的女孩，誠實；我信任她，真正的朋友，因為……。當(dāng)我憂傷時，她總是關(guān)心我，而且仔細(xì)傾聽我的問題，……。 2．有幽默感，擅長講滑稽的笑話；和她在一起，我很少感到……。 3. 喜歡DIY，…… 3．愿意和別人分享東西，幫助人時總有耐心，長大后……。

I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.

Answer 1

【答案】My good friend

I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.

She has a round face and big, smiling eyes. She is a little shorter than I. She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart.

She is a polite and honest girl. I trust her because she never lies. She is my real friend. When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully.

She also has a good sense of humor and is good at telling funny jokes. I seldom get bored with her.

She also likes DIY. She once personally made her mother a music box for her birthday. This made his mother very happy.

She is willing to share things with others. She is always patient when helping others. She said“ she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.“

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如a little，a pair of，trust sb.，care about，listen to，a good sense of humor，be good at，get bored，be willing to，share with，would like to do，grow up等。而She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart./ When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully./ She said she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。