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【題目】書面表達(dá)

無錫被評為內(nèi)地最宜居城市。假設(shè)你班對此進(jìn)行了一次班級討論，請你根據(jù)討論主題并結(jié)合所給信息，以“Be a Beautiful City”為題寫一份發(fā)言稿，號召廣大學(xué)生為建設(shè)美好城市作貢獻(xiàn)。內(nèi)容提示如下：

1．政府修建了很多新路、大橋，甚至還有地鐵；

2．新添了很多露天開放公園，每到周末和節(jié)假日，人們常常去那里野餐，游玩；

3．私家車越來越多，停車已成了大問題；

4．城市變化有利有弊；

5．你的希望：……

注意事項(xiàng)：

1．發(fā)言稿須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

2．第5個要點(diǎn)須用2至3句話展開合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3．詞數(shù)90左右，發(fā)言稿的開頭已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

4．發(fā)言稿內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。

Be a Beautiful City

There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．

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Answer 1

【答案】Be a Beautiful City

There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads, bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it's becoming difficult to park cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．

【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了大量短語，例如in the past few years，lots of，a number of，open parks，have a picnic，have fun，on weekends and holidays，more and more，both …and，deal with the problem，in the future等。而More and more people have their own cars and it's becoming difficult to park cars./ Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future.等多種more and more句式結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是短文的亮點(diǎn)。