Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

時(shí)間過(guò)得飛快，似乎幾個(gè)月前才進(jìn)入初三，現(xiàn)在中考卻近在眼前。請(qǐng)以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1．你發(fā)現(xiàn)老師現(xiàn)在上課語(yǔ)速很快。由于有太多的作業(yè)和考試，學(xué)生沒(méi)有足夠的時(shí)間來(lái)進(jìn)行課外活動(dòng)；

2．有的同學(xué)以前學(xué)習(xí)不太努力，但現(xiàn)在他們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到這次考試的重要性，并且全身心投入到學(xué)習(xí)中去；

3．你在這最后一個(gè)月里的打算和安排……

注意：

1．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；

2．第3要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3．詞數(shù)90左右，短文的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Are We Ready for the Challenge?

How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon!

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I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!

Answer 1

【答案】Are We Ready for the Challenge?

How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon! I find the teachers speak more quickly than usual in class now, and we have so much homework and so many exams that we do not have enough time for any after-school activities．Some students did not study hard enough before, but now they have realized the importance of the exam and are putting all their effort into study．During the last month, I am going to listen carefully in class and pay more attention to details, and it is also important for us to keep a balance between study and rest．

I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!

【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)如今的學(xué)習(xí)和以前的區(qū)別以及你的計(jì)劃和打算。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如usual，so much，after-school activities，the importance of，put ones effort into，pay attention to，it is adj for sb to do。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。