Question

【題目】生活中有許多美好事情值得回憶。你的美好回憶是什么？它是怎么發(fā)生的？請以“My sweet memory”為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文描述一下吧。

注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名

My sweet memory

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Answer 1

【答案】My sweet memory

My 14 - year- old birthday leftmea sweet memory.

Theclassroom seemed empty when I entered it that morning. Suddenly my classmatesstood up from belowthe desks almost at the same time, and they sang a happy birthday song to me together. “Happy Birthday to you!” and best wishes from my classmates and teachers appeared on the screen. What a big surprise! I was moved to tears. That moment was fixed in my mind forever.

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“My sweet memory”為題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述 “你的美好回憶是什么？它是怎么發(fā)生的？”。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運用一般過去時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中14 - year- old birthday，at the same time, best wishes，on the screen, and, in my mind 等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了并列句、時間狀語從句、感嘆句、被動句等，語句豐富，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。