Question

【題目】三年的初中生活即將結束，你一定對初中生活留下了很多美好的回憶。下周五你班要召開畢業(yè)班會，請根據(jù)下面的英文提示，并適當發(fā)揮，以“I remember ”為題，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，分享你校園生活中的一次活動或經(jīng)歷。

要點如下：1. What’s the event?

2. When and where did it happen?

3. How did you feel at that moment?

4. How has the event changed your life?

注意：1.短文需包含以上要點，并適當發(fā)揮。

2.短文中已給出的部分，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名等相關信息。

I remember

How time flies! My junior school life is coming to an end.

Answer 1

【答案】I remember

How time flies, my junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale.

When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.

Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children.

It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如come to an end，plan to do，a lot of，hold a charity sale，prepare for，in our spare time，hold on，at first，come to join us，give us some help，in the end，a lot，in need等。而復雜并列結構It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity./ We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us.和When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.等復雜從句結構的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。