Question

【題目】緊張而又忙碌的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊----成長記錄袋中還應(yīng)增添一份你自己滿意的答案。

根據(jù)上述提示，請以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”為題寫一篇文章，記錄你難忘的校園生活。首句已給出。

注意：. 1.語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名或能夠透露你個人身份的相關(guān)信息。

3.詞數(shù)80左右，信件的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

My Unforgettable Junior High School Life

How time flies!

Answer 1

【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.

In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.

In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.

【解析】

這篇短文要求我們以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life為題，回想一下自己即將過去的初中，講述難忘的初中生活。題目中用思維導(dǎo)圖，列出了一些文章中會用到的關(guān)鍵詞，供學(xué)生們參考使用。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般過去時、第一人稱為主來敘述。題目中并沒有給出具體的寫作內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力，可以從自己的學(xué)習(xí)、愛好、與同學(xué)的交往、與老師的相處以及自己的感受等方面進(jìn)行詳細(xì)闡述。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先要展開合理想象，補(bǔ)充文章細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，注意各部分內(nèi)容之間的層次，內(nèi)容要完整、充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰。其次應(yīng)注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯。句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句及其他復(fù)雜句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。