Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

母愛情深，母愛無價；學(xué)會感恩，學(xué)會回報。某英語網(wǎng)站舉辦以“My mother”為題的英語征文活動。請你根據(jù)下列提供的信息，寫一篇詞數(shù)不少于60詞的短文，介紹自己的母親和你們的真情故事。

提示：1) Introduction: her age, her job, her look, her ability, her hobby

2) What did she do for you?

3) What will you do for her?

My mother

Answer 1

【答案】

My mother

We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious and healthy food for me..

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文�？忌�首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本作文中給出的要點比較簡略，動筆前先要圍繞這些要點組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點全部表達(dá)出來，不要偏離文章中心。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要切合文章要表達(dá)的主題，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

寫作亮點：這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。