Question

【題目】近來(lái)，野生動(dòng)物園發(fā)生了老虎傷人的事件。我們作為游客應(yīng)該如何避免受到野生動(dòng)物的傷害呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇短文。

提示：

1. 遵守動(dòng)物園的各項(xiàng)規(guī)定；

2. 參觀時(shí)不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng)；

3. 時(shí)刻提醒自己安全第一；

4. 遇到危險(xiǎn)及時(shí)求助。

要求：

1.80詞以上（開(kāi)頭己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2. 文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；

4. 條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。

It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips.

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Answer 1

【答案】It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips. Firstly, every zoo has its own rules. We must read them before visiting it. Then we will know what to do and what not to do. We must follow the rules while visiting the zoo. Secondly, we had better go anywhere with our parents or friends in the zoo. Thirdly, we should remember that safety comes first all the time. We neither go to the dangerous places nor do the dangerous things. Finally, we must ask for help as soon as possible when we are in danger.

I believe we will be safe in the zoo if we do so.

【解析】

這是一篇提綱作文。題干列出了四點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，故第一段使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly和Finally進(jìn)行分條陳述，使文章層次分明、邏輯性強(qiáng)，每點(diǎn)要適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，比如這樣做的原因或好處等；第二段用一句話“I believe we will be safe in the zoo if we do so.”進(jìn)行總結(jié)。根據(jù)提示，使用到的單詞和短語(yǔ)有rule，follow，come first，dangerous，ask for help，in danger

好單詞：

rule 規(guī)則

follow 遵循

dangerous 危險(xiǎn)的

好短語(yǔ)：

had better do sth. 最好做某事

come first 首先要考慮到的

ask for help 尋求幫助

as soon as possible 盡快

in danger 處于危險(xiǎn)中

好句型：

We must read them before visiting it. 我們必須在參觀它之前閱讀它們。

before引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)主從句主語(yǔ)一致而從句是進(jìn)行時(shí)時(shí)，從句省略主語(yǔ)和be。

We must follow the rules while visiting the zoo. 參觀動(dòng)物園時(shí)我們必須遵守規(guī)定。

while引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)主從句主語(yǔ)一致而從句是進(jìn)行時(shí)時(shí)，從句省略主語(yǔ)和be。

We neither go to the dangerous places nor do the dangerous things. 我們既不去危險(xiǎn)的地方，也不做危險(xiǎn)的事情。

使用了“neither…nor… 既不……也不……”。