Question

【題目】根據(jù)圖片提示，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的作文。

要求:1)結(jié)合圖意,圍繞出行方式、通訊工具及空氣質(zhì)量展開敘述,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2)開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

Fifteen years ago Now

Great changes have taken place since I was born.

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Answer 1

【答案】Great changes have taken place since I was born.

Fifteen years ago, most people rode bikes when travelling for a short distance. Because there weren’t many cars, the air was fresh. And people kept in touch with each other mainly by telephone.

Now, many people own cars as well as cellphones which are widely used to chat on QQ, do shopping, etc. Lives seem easier than before, but too many cars make traffic heavier, and air pollution is getting worse.

To live a better life, we still have a lot to do.

【解析】這篇作文要求我們以Great changes have taken place since I was born為題目，介紹15年來我們的社會(huì)發(fā)生的變化。題目中用圖片的形式給我們展示了這些變化，從三個(gè)方面來介紹：出行方式、通訊工具和空前質(zhì)量，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將圖片的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。寫作時(shí)，需要注意文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，這篇作文可以分段寫，先介紹15年前人們的生活情況，另起一段介紹現(xiàn)在的情況。這樣文章的結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰，層次比較清楚。注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯。英語的句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)和主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，寫作時(shí)要從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型表達(dá)。通過審題可知，這篇作文應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。文章中使用一些較好的句型和短語，語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢，提升文章檔次。