Question

【題目】Writing(作文) ：

Writing at least 60 words on the topic “A moving __________ of 2016”. (以“2016n年，讓我感動的___________”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)。

盤點即將過去的2016年，你一定經(jīng)歷了許許多多的感動：一句溫暖的話、一個會意的眼神，一份特別的禮物，一個溫馨的畫面......請你選取最觸動你心弦的部分，寫下來與大家分享。

（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）

Answer 1

【答案】例文

A moving present of 2016

Even now, well into the second decade of the 21st century, people tend to view video games as a guilty pleasure, however, my father doesn’t. When I got into the last year of junior middle school, he bought me a PS4 instead of endless exercise books. What he told me on that day is still fresh in my mind. He said that if you thought the time was right, you could enjoy the PS4. Just then, I saw a faint smile on his face, which was the best present of 2016. It not only encouraged me but also moved me a lot.

【解析】

1. 題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文，也是話題作文，話題是“A moving present of 2016”。本文時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。認為閱讀材料，認真審題，確定主題，根據(jù)主題列出提綱。