Question

假如你叫王浩，今天是開學的第一天，請根據表格中所提供的信息，向班上的同學介紹一下你自己。詞數：50詞左右。

電話：5340261

家庭成員：祖父母、父母、叔嬸、堂弟和自己

愛好：排球、網球

收藏品（collection）：5個網球拍，4個排球

喜愛的食物：雞肉，蘋果

                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            

Answer 1

One possible version：
I’m Wang Hao. Nice to meet you! Let me introduce myself. I have a big family. There are eight people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents, my uncle, my aunt, my cousin and I. I like volleyball and tennis. I have five tennis rackets and four volleyballs. I like chicken and apples.  My phone number is 5340261.I hope to make friends with everyone.Thanks.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，假設自己是王浩并向同學介紹他自己的家人。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如There are ......，They are......及I like...... 等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意文后要表達自己希望和大家交朋友。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了家庭成員，接下來自己的愛好，最后指出自己希望和大家交朋友。此處用了 introduce myself， hope to ，make friends with等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。