Question

【題目】 分享是一種行為方式，也是一種良好的品質(zhì)( quality)。人生處處充滿(mǎn)分享，懂得分享非常重要。分享快樂(lè)，快樂(lè)加倍；分擔(dān)煩惱，煩惱減半。

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)合思維導(dǎo)圖所示，以“My Sharing Experience”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。

要求：1 )短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)提示，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2) 80詞左右(題目和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。

參考詞匯：be full of, cut, in half, thanks to, overcome

My Sharing Experience

Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】例文

My Sharing Experience

Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people. Life is full of sharing. I think it's important to share happiness and sadness with others.

When I was ten, we moved to a new district. Facing the strange surroundings, I felt lonely and upset. It was my neighbor, Tim, who helped me find pleasure again. He showed me around and introduced new friends to me. He also shared his favorite books, music and learning methods with me. We soon became good friends. Thanks to his sharing I began to share with others.

As we know, when happiness is shared, it will be doubled; when a problem is shared, it is like cutting it in half. Sharing brings us pleasure, confidence and courage to overcome difficulties. Let's open our hearts to share with others in our future life.

【解析】

1、題干解讀：本文是命題作文，題目是我的分享經(jīng)歷，要點(diǎn)明確。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)；人稱(chēng)應(yīng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主。