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【題目】書面表達

假如你是學(xué)校廣播站英文臺的記者。本期“驢友之家”將介紹我國的桂林地區(qū)。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語報道，在廣播時段播出。80詞左右。

提示：1.桂林是我國著名的旅游城市之一；

2．桂林氣候較溫和；

3．桂林山水優(yōu)美，有許多野生動植物；

4．人們可以乘船欣賞自然美景；

5．人們可以品嘗各種香甜的水果。

參考詞匯：野生的wild adj.

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Answer 1

【答案】Guilin is a famous city that attracts many travellers around the world. It is so beautiful that many people believe its scenery is the best in the world.

It is good for visitors to travel to this beautiful city, because it is neither too hot nor too cold all year around. Guilin is famous for its beautiful mountains and clear water. If you travel to Guilin, you can sit in a boat and enjoy the beautiful scenery around you. There are also many wild animals and plants in Guilin because of a large number of mountains. The fruit there is also delicious.

Guilin is such a beautiful place that I believe you will love it.

【解析】

這篇作文需要寫一篇英語報道，目的是介紹一下我國的桂林地區(qū)，具體要求已經(jīng)給出了，描述的時候要注意正確運用短語和句子，按照邏輯先總起描述，然后描述一下氣候、景色以及動植物情況，最后描述一下人們可以乘船欣賞自然美景，在這期間可以適當增添細節(jié)，使得行文更加連貫。

首句就點名了文章的主題Guilin is a famous city that attracts many travellers around the world. “桂林是一個吸引了全世界許多游客的著名的城市”，這里有一個that引導(dǎo)的關(guān)于先行詞“city”（城市）的定語從句，具體說明了是怎么樣的城市。后面一句It is so beautiful that many people believe its scenery is the best in the world.（它是如此的美麗以至于很多人相信它的景色是世界上最好的），這里用到了so+adj+that句式，屬于是額外補充的描寫，準確而有文采。其后就對這座城市進行了細致的描述，比如用到了it is adj for sb to do…意為“對某人來說做…是…樣的”，neither…nor…“既不…也不…”，be famous for“以…而著名”，enjoy the beautiful scenery“享受美景”這樣的短語或結(jié)構(gòu)，最后文章有一個較為精煉的結(jié)尾“Guilin is such a beautiful place that I believe you will love it.”（桂林是一個如此美麗的地方，我相信你一定會愛上它的），總體來說行文連貫，語言準確，完成了要求的寫作任務(wù)。