Question

【題目】話題作文：構(gòu)建文明和諧的社會是實現(xiàn)中國夢的一個重要組成部分，請你圍繞構(gòu)建和諧社會(build a harmonious society)寫一篇文章。

提示：(1)對國家、社會的熱愛；

(2) 對父母、師長、同學(xué)的尊重與關(guān)心；

(3)對環(huán)境的保護。

(B)圖示作文：仔細觀察下列圖片，展開合理想象，寫一篇作文。

要求：(1)話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。(2)詞數(shù)在80～100詞之間。

(3)要求字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

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Answer 1

【答案】Build a harmonious society

Building a “harmonious society” plays an important part in achieving Chinese Dreams. As middle school students, what should we do?

First of all, we should love our motherland. Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school’s activities. Secondly, let’s fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.

Let’s start right now and try our best a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!

(B) My friend Li Ming had an accident yesterday.

When school was over, Li Ming went to play basketball with his classmates on the playground. They played very happily. Suddenly, Li Ming fell down and hurt his legs. He couldn’t help crying. His classmates hurried to take him to the hospital. The doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. His classmates all went to see him with some flowers. Li Ming felt very happy.

What good children his classmates are!

【解析】

A篇：

這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下如何才能構(gòu)建文明和諧的社會。主要從對國家、社會的熱愛；對父母、師長、同學(xué)的尊重與關(guān)心；對環(huán)境的保護這三個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school’s activities. 讓我們熱衷于家鄉(xiāng)的發(fā)展，積極參與學(xué)校的各項活動。本題是由and 連接的句子。

【高分句型二】

We should also care for each other and help those in need. 我們也應(yīng)該互相關(guān)心，幫助那些需要幫助的人。這句話的語言很好。

B篇：

這是一篇圖示作文，根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容展開合理想象。圖片顯示的內(nèi)容是：圖一，打籃球；圖二，有一個學(xué)生摔倒了，腿受傷了；圖三，同學(xué)們趕忙送他去醫(yī)院。圖四，他的同學(xué)帶著花去看他。主要從這四個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第三人稱。注意作文中必須包含圖片上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

The doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. 醫(yī)生仔細地檢查了他，他不得不住院幾天。本題是由and 連接的并列句。

【高分句型二】

What good children his classmates are! 他的同學(xué)們多好啊！

這句話是由what引導(dǎo)的感嘆句。