Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)你給班主任王老師寫一份推薦信，推薦王芳做班長(zhǎng)。要點(diǎn)如下：

1.有很多好的個(gè)人品質(zhì)，聰明，富有創(chuàng)造力；2.勤奮好學(xué)，為人謙虛，從不炫耀；

3.樂于助人，常幫助我們學(xué)習(xí)功課；4.做事很有條理，能使所有事情保持井然有序.

Dear Miss Wang,

I would like to recommend Wang Fang to be our monitor. Because she _____________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Lei

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Miss Wang

I would like to recommend Wang Fang to be our monitor.Because Wang Fang is an excellent student. She got good grades in all the courses. She is smart and thoughtful.She is hard-working and modest.And she never shows off. She is also friendly and considerate, and she is always helping others with their lessons. She does everything carefully and keeps everything in order.

Yours

Li Lei

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者推薦王芳做班長(zhǎng)的推薦信。小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如She is smart and thoughtful.She is hard-working and modest.And she never shows off. She is also friendly and considerate, and she is always helping others with their lessons.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。