Question

【題目】在你的成長歷程中，一定收到過禮物。有件禮物不一定貴重，但是在你看來卻非常珍貴。某英語雜志以“ A Precious Present(一件珍貴的禮物)”為題，舉辦征文活動，請寫一篇短文，跟大家分享。

要點提示：

1．這件禮物是什么？

2．你為什么覺得它珍貴？

3．它背后有什么故事？

要求：

1．語言規(guī)范，語句通順，內(nèi)容充實；

2．字數(shù)：不少于100詞；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

A Precious Present

The title “A Precious Present” reminds me of quite a few gifts I've got.

I'll regard it as a treesure forever.

Answer 1

【答案】A Precious Present

The title “A Precious Present” reminds me of quite a few gifts I've got. Yet, the first comes to my mind is the book, The Adventures of Tom Sawyer.

On my tenth birthday, my father gave it to me as a gift. Because I didn't like reading, I put it on the bookshelf. One boring day, I picked it up and looked through it. Unexpectedly, the story interested me greatly. I found pleasure in reading books. From then on, I became fascinated in reading.

Though the book is not valuable, it's precious. I'll regard it as a treasure forever.

【解析】

這篇作文要求以珍貴的禮物為話題，寫一篇文章。題目中給出一些提示，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，最后要注意英語的表達習(xí)慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。