Question

【題目】贈(zèng)人玫瑰，手留余香。幫助他人就是幫助我們自己。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示寫一篇英文，和同學(xué)們分享你幫助他人的經(jīng)歷及感悟。

內(nèi)容提示：

★幫助他人的一次經(jīng)歷

★幫助他人的感悟

參考詞匯：unforgettable，experience

要求：

★詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

★必須包括內(nèi)容提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫

★文字中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名，校名，其他地名

Everyone may meet with difficulties in his life. We need others’ help when we are in trouble. Now I’d like to share.

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Answer 1

【答案】Everyone may meet with difficulties in his life. We need others’ help when we are in trouble. Now I’d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.

Lin Fang is a new student who came to our class this term. She felt lonely and unhappy because she had no friends here. Seeing this, I often shared my favorite books with her and chatted with her after class. On weekends, I often invited her to my home. Gradually, smile appeared on her face. She likes sharing her ideas and feelings with me. We are good friends now.

Helping Lin Fang makes me gain a sincere friendship. Roses given, fragrance in hand. Helping others means helping ourselves. Not only can helping others make us happy but also we can get a lot from it and enjoy our lives more.

【解析】

這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你幫助他人的經(jīng)歷及感悟。所提供的材料中列舉了：幫助他人的一次經(jīng)歷；幫助他人的感悟。主要從經(jīng)歷和感悟兩個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

Lin Fang is a new student who came to our class this term. 林芳是本學(xué)期來(lái)我們班的一個(gè)新學(xué)生。

句子who came to our class this term.是由who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。

【高分句型二】

She felt lonely and unhappy because she had no friends here. 她感到孤獨(dú)和不快樂(lè)，因?yàn)樗�在這里沒(méi)有朋友。

句子because she had no friends here. 是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。