Question

【題目】人生中有很多第一次：第一次學(xué)游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家務(wù)；第一次贏得比賽；第一次……。請根據(jù)提示，就你的第一次……寫一篇短文。 內(nèi)容包括：

1. 第一次……的整個過程；

2. 你的感受。

要求：

1. 詞數(shù)：80-100（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】The first time to learn to swim

As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time to learn to swim.

Last summer vacation, my father took me to the swimming pool in our neighborhood and taught me to swim. It was the first for me to swim. At first, I could not swim at all. My father was very patient. He encouraged me and taught me how to swim. He taught me how to breathe in the water first. Then, He threw me into the deepest part of the swimming pool. I was so frightened that I couldn’t move. But I never gave up. I felt safe with my dad around. Three hours later, with the help of my father, I could swim by myself. Although I couldn't swim very well, I was very happy.

I will never forget this experience, because I not only learned how to swim, but also learned to be brave!

【解析】

這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示信息，選擇給你印象深刻的第一次活動進(jìn)行描述并談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋�時態(tài)主要為一般過去時，人稱主要為第一、三人稱。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文。首先開門見山，介紹自己的第一次活動是什么，接下來詳細(xì)介紹第一次活動的整個過程，最后談一談自己的感受。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。注意： 注意緊扣主題，意思連貫，語言通順，書寫規(guī)范，避免出現(xiàn)拼寫錯誤；詞數(shù)在80—100。