Question

【題目】 暑假來臨, 請以珍愛生命注意安全等方面向全校學(xué)生發(fā)出倡議，內(nèi)容提示：

1、不私自下河洗澡游泳。

2、不打架。

3、外出注意交通安全。

4、注意飲食。

5、你還應(yīng)注意哪些？開頭已給。

Dear students,

As we known, safety is the important thing in our life, so we should try our best to make sure we are safe. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear students,

As we known, safety is the important thing in our life, so we should try our best to make sure we are safe.

We mustn’t have a bath in river or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. We should be friendly to others, because fighting is strongly banned. We should always pay attention to the traffic when we go out. Pay more attention to your diet. We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problem. Furthermore, in case of emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers.

In a word, following these safety rules above can make us live in peace.

【解析】

1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。按照所給的安全方面需要的注意事項(xiàng)來展開描述。

2.例文解讀：本文采用的是第一人稱，時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，并保持主謂一致。邏輯性強(qiáng)，句子通順。

3.高分亮點(diǎn)：

短語：try one’s best to do sth“盡某人最大努力做某事”；pay attention to“注意”；in case of“萬一”；in a word“總而言之”。

句子：We should be friendly to others, because fighting is strongly banned句中because引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句；We should always pay attention to the traffic when we go out句中when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句。