Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

Peter是一名初三的學(xué)生。運動讓他的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。 請根據(jù)所給圖畫，展開適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想，完成下面的短文。

注意：

1．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2．語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3．詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Sport makes a difference

Peter is a Grade 9 student.

Answer 1

【答案】

Peter is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates， so he decided to do sport.

He joined Xuanwu Football Club and practised hard there. Because of football， his life has changed a lot. he finds himself much healthier than before. Now， he has grown into a tall strong guy. What’s more， he is very good at playing football. Last month， he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award.

Peter needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.

【解析】

試題解析：

試題分析：本題給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點展開寫作。根據(jù)所給材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)、一般過去時態(tài)和現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。注意時態(tài)、人稱，要將題目要求的要點列舉出來，注意固定詞組搭配。

亮點說明：本文用了一些短語和句式，如：used to， decided to do， be good at， took part in， What’s more等使得文章句子的結(jié)構(gòu)不再單一，增加了文章的亮點；并且還使用了同級比較句與比較狀語從句。如： He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates. He finds himself much healthier than before.增加了文章的色彩。