Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，學(xué)校英語廣播站正在招募主持人。請你用英文給負(fù)責(zé)的老

師 Sam 寫一封自薦信，內(nèi)容包括：你的基本信息，想做主持人的理由，以及

具體打算做的事情。

提示詞語： like, improve, help, introduce, share

提示問題： ● What’s your name and hobby?

● Why do you want to be a host?

● What are you going to do?

Dear Sam,

I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station (英語廣播站). __

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I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sam,

I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station. My name is Li Hua

from Class 1 Grade3. I like watching English movies and listening to English songs in

my spare time. I want to be a host because it’s a good chance to improve my oral

English, at the same time, I can help other students get more information which they

are interested in. As a host, I have some plans. I am going to not only introduce some

western culture, some good ways of learning English, but also share some beautiful

English music and poems. I’d be very happy if I become a host.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題

本篇書面表達(dá)是圍繞一篇演講稿展開，貼近學(xué)校生活，學(xué)生有話可寫。但是在寫作上一定要注意審題，不要跑題或者偏題。要按要點和給出的提示問題來完成寫作任務(wù)，但不能生硬的寫幾個句子交待了事，切記，逐條生硬的翻譯，沒有任何的連接詞。在詞匯的運用上，除了用自己熟悉的句型與詞匯外，注意句型的變化，連詞的使用使詞義連貫流暢，同時也使得文章有層次感，有條理性。注意高級句型的運用提升文章的檔次。

寫作亮點：

文章開頭點明主題，表明目的，然后對自己進(jìn)行簡要的個人介紹。句型變化多，有定語從句的使用，數(shù)量恰當(dāng)，句式豐富，短語多樣。關(guān)于討論自己的競選后的工作計劃，使用了正確的時態(tài)進(jìn)行表達(dá)（I am going to not only introduce some western culture…），有結(jié)尾，（I’m looking forward to your early reply.）體現(xiàn)了文章的完整性。