Question

【題目】Look at the pictures blow. Write at least 60 words about them on the topic “A/A present.”(看下面的圖片，以“一件---的禮物”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的作文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)

（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他信息，否則不予評(píng)分）

The following is for reference only. (以下內(nèi)容僅供參考)

Strange door Precious empty Excited note

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Answer 1

【答案】A Precious Present

Sending their children to the school , Mrs Jones drove home. She opened the door and sat at the table to enjoy a cup of coffee for the free moment. Suddenly she noticed a strange box with beautiful silk knots lying on the floor. She held the box and wondered what was in it. Was it an empty box just a joke from her families, or was there something precious in it? With all the confusion, she untied the box. There was a note in it. She sat down and read, “Dear mommy, many thanks for all the good things you have done for Jane and me. We would like to take this opportunity to express our great appreciation for your hard work. Happy Mother’s Day!” How excited the mother was! In the box ,was the most beautiful flowers in the world. All the doubts were solved. It was the Mother’s Day today.

【解析】

本篇為看圖作文，要求按照?qǐng)D片提供的信息，以A/An present 為題，寫一篇作文。

1.題干解讀：本篇是看圖作文，首先要仔細(xì)觀察每一幅圖中女子的表情和動(dòng)作等，注意圖片中的盒子是故事發(fā)展的線索，根據(jù)線索設(shè)計(jì)故事發(fā)展情節(jié)和結(jié)尾，據(jù)此把題目補(bǔ)充完整。本篇是故事，敘述過(guò)去的事情，主時(shí)態(tài)是一般過(guò)去時(shí)。書寫時(shí)要注意發(fā)揮想象力，充分利用所給的提示詞，使故事內(nèi)容完整合理。