【題目】書面表達

Lily在學校參加了一個Buddy Club, 從那以后，她改變了很多。請你結(jié)合下面所給的提示，寫一篇約80個單詞的英語短文。

In the past

Now

Personalities

(性格)

shy, quiet, get nervous easily,

not dare to speak in public

brave, outgoing, kind of active…

Hobbies

Reading and watching TV

reading, singing ,dancing, making friends, playing badminton…

Abilities

Doing well in reading

Be good at reading, dancing, singing, communicating and sports.

要求: 1.覆蓋要點，可適當增加情節(jié)；2. 80詞左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

People sure change all the time, right? What we should do is to learn from Lily. Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.

【答案】Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.

Lily used to be a shy and quiet girl. She used to get nervous easily and did not dare to speak in public. And even if she spoke with strangers, her face turned red at once. She liked nothing but reading or watching TV at home in her free time. However, she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club. Now, Lily is so brave, outgoing and kind of active that she isn’t afraid of speaking out in public anymore. What’s more, she has lots of hobbies, such as singing, writing, dancing and playing badminton, and she does well in them. Besides, she is outgoing and likes making friends. She is popular among us now.

People sure change all the time, right? What we should do is to learn from Lily. Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.

【解析】

這是一篇要求寫現(xiàn)在和過去對比的作文，所以要用的Lily used to do…..but now she….等類似的句子。所以文章要用到一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時兩種時態(tài)。為了使文章有條理有次序可以先寫過去，再寫現(xiàn)在。作文中給的有寫作提示，注意所給要點都要覆蓋的到，句子和句子之間注意連接過渡詞的使用，使文章顯得更連貫。最后注意對文章進行總結(jié)。

本篇作文先用一般過去時寫過去Lily的性格特點，中間用到even if…., She liked nothing but….等使碎片化的詞語連接在一起。中間使用“However, she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club.”作為過渡，接下來寫現(xiàn)在的性格特點。作者使用了例如What’s more…Besides…等使文章更有次序性。最后以People sure change all the time, right? ….. Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves. 作為對人們的建議。做到收尾呼應，是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。

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