Question

【題目】寫(xiě)作（注意：文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名、校名和師名，否則不得分）

假如你是John Smith, 下周六是你的生日，你邀請(qǐng)你的同學(xué)Jimmy參加你的生日聚會(huì)。你希望他早點(diǎn)到你家，并帶來(lái)一些音樂(lè)光碟。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)函。

Dear Jimmy,

John

話題作文：近來(lái)網(wǎng)絡(luò)上流行一句話：“世界上最遠(yuǎn)的距離是我在你對(duì)面，你卻在看手機(jī)。”這句話真實(shí)反映了當(dāng)前的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，“手機(jī)控”，“低頭族”越來(lái)越多且呈年輕化趨勢(shì)。請(qǐng)你以“My opinion on using the mobile phone"為題針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，并提出改進(jìn)建議。

提示詞：a mobile phone freak 手機(jī)控

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jimmy,

Next Saturday is my birthday. I'll have a birthday party at home. I invite you to come to my birthday party. Can you come a little earlier? Please bring some music CDs. I'm sure we'll have a good time.

John

My opinion on using the mobile phones

Mobile phones are widely used these days. More and more people use mobile phones to do different kinds of things, such as chatting and shopping. But they spend too much time on the mobile phones. More and more mobile phone freaks appear. Not only the adults but also the children are members of them.

I don't think it's normal. Watching mobile phones too much is bad for our eyes. We have little time to exercise. It's not good for our health. We pay more attention to it. It influences our study and lives. We have less and less time to communicate with others.

In my opinion, we can do something meaningful instead of playing with the mobile phones all the time. Reading, exercising, visiting friends and communicating with families are also good ways to spend your free time.

I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.

【解析】

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如have a birthday party，at home，invite sb. to do，a little earlier，have a good time，these days，more and more，different kinds of things，such as，not only…but also，members of，too much，pay more attention to，less and less，communicate with others，instead of等。而More and more mobile phone freaks appear. / We have less and less time to communicate with others.等比較級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)和I'm sure we'll have a good time./ I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.等賓語(yǔ)從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。