Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

91. 假如你是某雜志社編輯Mr. Knowledgeable,根據(jù)中學(xué)生 Bob的來(lái)信內(nèi)容，給他寫(xiě)封回信，幫助解決他所遇到的問(wèn)題。字?jǐn)?shù)80—100，開(kāi)頭已給出。

Dear Knowledgeable,

My problem is that I can’t get on with my family. My parents always say “no” to my ideas without any reason. So I often quarrel(吵架) with them. Also, my brother is not very nice to me. He always refuses to let me watch my favorite TV show. Instead, he watches whatever he wants until late at night. I don’t think this is fair. At home, I always feel lonely and nervous. Is that normal? What can I do?

Bob

Dear Bob,

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Bob,

It’s normal to have these feelings. Why don’t you talk about these feelings with your family? First, it’s not right to quarrel with your parents. I don’t think quarrelling can solve problems. You’d better have a talk with your parents. Tell them to have a discussion with you before saying “no” to your ideas. Second, Why not sit down and communicate with your brother? You should explain that you don’t mind him watching TV all the time. However, he should let you watch your favourite TV show. I hope things will be better soon.

Knowledgeable

【解析】

這是一篇書(shū)信體作文，要求我們以某雜志社編輯Knowledgeable的身份，給Bob寫(xiě)一封回信。首先我們應(yīng)將Bob的來(lái)信讀一遍，弄清楚Bob遇到的問(wèn)題，然后給他提一些建議，幫助他解決他的問(wèn)題。通過(guò)閱讀可知，Bob的問(wèn)題是與他家人不能友好的相處，總是感到很孤獨(dú)、緊張。這樣的問(wèn)題是中學(xué)生的日常生活中普遍存在的問(wèn)題，在教材中也討論過(guò)類似的話題，因此這個(gè)題目是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，學(xué)生們會(huì)有話可說(shuō)，我們只需要將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)即可。需要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，不能逐詞將漢語(yǔ)翻譯成英語(yǔ)，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型。尤其注意完整的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，以常見(jiàn)的是主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主。為提升文章檔次，可穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句，如賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等。還可以使用一些特殊句式，如感嘆句、倒裝句等，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使上下文意連貫，語(yǔ)句通順。