Question

【題目】（題文）書面表達(dá)

三年快樂而充實(shí)的初中生活結(jié)束了，你將進(jìn)入高中學(xué)習(xí)�；仡欉^去，展望未來，你對(duì)高中生活充滿期待。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文。文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：①簡(jiǎn)單回顧初中的學(xué)習(xí)生活，感恩老師的教導(dǎo)；②設(shè)想高中的生活、學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境(如

餐廳，圖書館，運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)……)及與老師、同學(xué)融洽相處；③生活多彩、學(xué)業(yè)進(jìn)步。

參考詞匯：get along with；colorful(adj.)；

I am graduating from this Junior middle school and I will study in a high school soon. I`m so excited now.

Answer 1

【答案】I am graduating from this Junior middle school and I will study in a high school soon. I`m so excited now.

First of all, I thank my teachers because they always try their best to make the lessons lively and interesting. I have learnt a lot from them.

Everything is new for me in High School. I expect that it is big and clean with a large dining room. And the library is full of different kind of interesting books so that I can read them in my spare time. I hope that both my teachers and classmates are friendly and I can get along well with them. And I also expect that the life out of class is colorful so that I can enjoy all kinds of activities.

Of course, I expect I can do well in study and get a good grade in my new school.

【解析】

這篇題目要求我們根據(jù)提示寫一篇英語作文，內(nèi)容包括：回顧初中的學(xué)習(xí)生活，感恩老師的教導(dǎo)；然后設(shè)想一下未來高中的生活，從幾個(gè)方面介紹：首先是學(xué)習(xí)的環(huán)境；然后是與老師和同學(xué)們的關(guān)系；接下來是高中的學(xué)習(xí)和業(yè)余生活。根據(jù)這些提示，組織語言，并用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。通過審題可知，文章中的兩個(gè)內(nèi)容，應(yīng)以設(shè)想高中生活為主，所占篇幅應(yīng)較大些；注意根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要，使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃途渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，然后使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句及其他復(fù)雜句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使全篇文章上下文意連貫，語句通順，表達(dá)流暢。