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【題目】今年初《流浪地球》在中國火熱上映。影片故事設定在2075年，講述太陽即將毀火，已經(jīng)不適合人類生存，而面對絕境，人類將開啟“流浪地球”計劃，試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系，尋找人類新家園的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如，老師問:希望是什么?班長回答:希望是我們這個年代鉆石一樣的東西。你的筆友Demon觀看后，印象深刻，給你寫了一封郵件。請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容結(jié)合你的情況，用英語回復。

To: LiHua@China. com

From: Demon@ America. com

Subject:Problems and hope

Dear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things? What problems do you often meet in your school life? How do you usually solve your problems? Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her? What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything. Best wishes, Demon

注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù);

2.回復必須包括所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順;

3.文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關信息。

Dear Demon

I'm glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Please write to me and tell me your view.

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Demon，

I'm glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don't want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.

In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always comes to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.

I think hope is the driving force of all, as long as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?

Please write to me and tell me your view.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

這是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先要注意書信的書寫格式，要對來信中的問題作出全面的答復。同時在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。