Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

難忘的初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲，你一定既有收獲又有不足，也有許多對(duì)自己未來(lái)的期待。請(qǐng)以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對(duì)未來(lái)的期盼。

注意:1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

2.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語(yǔ)言連貫、通順;

3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.

Answer 1

【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.

In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.

Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!

【解析】試題本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫(xiě)作信息，闡述自己難忘的中學(xué)生活。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中 not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達(dá)了自己愿望與想法，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。